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Belle, Out of Control Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/28/14

Very Good!

Loved It. It's coming along nicely. Please hurry with chapter 5. :)

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by notusuallyshy03/01/14

Gentle

Gentle authority, very appealing and working nicely for now! I've read this from the first chapter and it's flowing well, but could do with a second page.

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by SBurnett03/01/14

Thank you!

So glad you're both enjoying the story! I'm having a blast writing it, and don't worry--there is plenty more to come (including some longer chapters, too). :)

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by Irol03/01/14

Yes yes

Very good! eager for the next chapter. This has been my favorite chapter so far.

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by Anonymous03/03/14

Yes!!!!

That was epic!! Chapter 5, please!!

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by joodle03/03/14

Better

Better, much better. BUT, is it just me, or did he admit to having watched her masturbate through her window in the first chapter? This chapter he questions her about her masturbating techniques. It doesn't match up to how you began the story. Remember to be consistent. Other than that, it is getting better. Love the forced orgasm through oral. Not big on oral either myself, but the non-consensual aspect of it made it work. Can't wait to see him punish her!!!

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by SBurnett03/05/14

Joodle: He only saw her...

...masturbate a couple times at her home. He knows that we girls don't always do it the same way every single time; plus, he enjoys embarrassing her by asking these types of questions that she's clearly uncomfortable answering. ;) I absolutely see why that could be interpreted as inconsistency, though, so that's the sort of thing I'll try to clarify in future stories. Thank you so much for the suggestion, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

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by SBurnett03/05/14

Anonymous:

Chapter 5 was published today! Happy reading. :)

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by SBurnett03/05/14

Irol:

Thank you! So glad you loved this chapter, and I hope you keep enjoying the series!

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