Good start! Can't wait to see the training she'll have to do and what other packages... she will get.... Thanks for sharing
For a great story full of anticipation. Looking forward to the next chapter
Awesome start. Please more!!
Nothing to get excited about. I'll pass on future chapters
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I like small package!!!
Good start! Can't wait to see the training she'll have to do and what other packages... she will get.... Thanks for sharing
Thank you
For a great story full of anticipation. Looking forward to the next chapter
Love it!! More please!
Awesome start. Please more!!
Nothing to get excited about. I'll pass on future chapters
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