on the lacking of discipline

As I said before in the discipline thread

this one has more things going on between the lines than I can nail down. gj

I admit it

After the line 8 this one goes right over my head. But that's on me.

makes me think!

i really love all the internal word play here!

thoughts into
in too
intuitively speaking

AND it just gets better from there! Thanks for sharing this one.

You have a very strange relationship with your muse, butters, which I'm sure some people would love to analyze. :D She seems like a pretty cool gal. Now, about the beating, I guess it depends on her preferences.

Fun poem, I like the change in tone halfway through. And nice enjambment on the last stanza.

Isn't this like cooking at the stove without any pants? Drinking cocoa topless is a dangerous game to play while being deep in thought.

damn so many i havd missed

Fun, fun write be as undisciplined as you like if you are producing this, the double meanings, the sounds, the the well the whole damn thing.