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First Anniversary Party Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/02/14

A helpful tip from a low-population mid-west state:

If you use a blowtorch when removing fingers and toes, the wounds are self-cauterizing.

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by Anonymous03/02/14

Sadistic

A level of sadistic cruelty matched only by the Gestapo in WW2

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by IronDragon03/02/14

Reminds me of Dexter.

The plastic to keep the area sanitized, that is.

Great to see a real Loving Wife who didn't give up or give in! I've never liked the "fuck her until she likes it" tales. If anything like that happened to my wife, I would do something very similar to the assholes who perpetrated it.

Unlike this tale, however, they wouldn't survive, and their bodies would never be found.

The last couple of lines said it perfectly: "I love my wife, and if you know anything of love, you understand. There's some things a man's just gotta do."

Trust me when I say I Understand.

Well worth the 5 Stars I gave it.

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by Anonymous03/02/14

Psycho fetish fantasy that belongs in fetish or non erotic, not here. The story the other guy wrote might be non con yours is more like some over the top Dexter revenge fantasy as someone already said. Kinda dumb too, do the cops suffer from Downs?

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by Masterfuljim03/02/14

I agree with dragon

Nobody would have lived after I was through.
And for the first time ever I have read of a woman actually biting down.
Halle bloody lujah..
I wish it would happen more in these stories

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by Anonymous03/02/14

Now THAT was BTB to the extreme!

Burn the bitch, burn the bastard, burn them all. A sadistic tale of torture and revenge. And a damn good job of it. All I can say is OUCH! Even though this may have been over the top, I'd rather have this ending then so many other stories endings in which nothing happens. Keep at it.

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by Valerion03/02/14

Awww...

Where's the details? I loved it but some time spent detailing what was done to them more thoroughly would have been nice. Also, it would have been cool if the wife would have been a participant. Oh well...still a fun read.

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by Anonymous03/02/14

What can I say...wow

5*

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by rflikeslit03/02/14

For A mild Mannered Man...

Hurt the ones I love...........and I'd do exactly the same, though I'm not sure I'd be able to stop!

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by C_frommn03/03/14

You were right

If you don't like Violence "do not Read" . I read and loved it. if someone i trusted drugged me and hurt my wife they would Pray for death b-4 thinking they were free.

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by ifeanyi03/04/14

5 stars but damn this shit is too cold !

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by Anonymous03/05/14

my way

my kind of guy!!

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by Anonymous03/05/14

Excellent--5 stars!

Sometimes evil has to be combated with evil. So does that make us evil? Or not, because momentarily evil was good. Hmmm....

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by joln32103/07/14

In the Movie Pulp Fiction, one of the best lines spoken was when Marsellus Wallace says: "What now? Let me tell you what now. I'ma call a coupla hard, pipe-hittin' ( n word) who'll go to work on the homes here with a pair of pliers and a blow torch. You hear me talkin', hillbilly boy? I ain't through with you by a damn sight. I'ma get medieval on your ass." I can still visualise actor Ving Rhames as Marsellus standing there with the ball gag hanging off to one side holding the shotgun .

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by Anonymous04/17/14

LOVED this line:

"As a form of anger management, I can highly recommend total annihilation of your enemies, delivered personally."
LMFAO!!

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by betrayedbylove04/25/14

Oh Yeah

Ha Ha Ha

Excellent revenge against all the rapists. Destroy and keep them alive.
No mercy.
Damn. Are you sure you ain't from South Philly?

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by Bfreetorun04/28/14

I had read this once before but for some reason failed to comment.

This man did what needed to be done and his wife did a good job by fighting all the way. Each of those that got retribution after they served their jail term deserved just what they got, possibly more, considering. The poor woman had never done a thing to them, they were just "having fun". Give 'em Hell, twice!

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by bearslady07/27/14

Well done

Two things: One, if this philosophy became the punishment for pedophiles, I'm thinking they would hesitate greatly before torturing children. Two, note to self: never ever piss off FTDS,. He has a wicked imagination when it comes to revenge ;-)

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by Gnome9208/04/14

SCOTT TENNORMAN

To quote South Park; dude remind me to never piss off FTDS!

On another note brilliant story

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by kjohns200108/05/14

Great

Great finish. NEVER fuck with someone willing to do ANYTHING for revenge. You hurt me, I hurt you worse...or kill you, slowly and painfully of course. Perfect motto to live by.

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by xtchr09/28/14

No sympathy!

I have absolutely no sympathy for the punks and their wives who raped a woman, or who egged-on the rapists. They deserve everything they got. Actually his revenge was quite unique, so much better than just putting a bullet in their head. Thank you for finishing and unfinished story and in so fine a fashion.

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by Anonymous12/16/14

Hmmm

Ain't it a bitch. I'm sure there's a crowd of people out there that think rape is no big deal, or that vengeance can be taken over the edge, but I think of rape as torture (not what liberals call rape, where someone decides two years later the sex wasn't all that great so it must have been rape, etc.) I've always thought that pedophiles, for example, should be buried under the prison vs. some bullshit rehab that almost ensures a reenactment of the original crime. I definitely think any male rapist should, at a bare minimum, have his cock and balls stapled to a tree trunk, then pushed over backwards repeatedly, so what FTDS laid out here is just peachy by me.

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by Anonymous02/14/15

5 stars

Loved it.

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by Tavadelphin02/20/15

OK - so nuke for nuke -

I am pretty good - of course he could never get so lucky - but good on ;'em heh

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by tazz31702/22/15

BEING HATEFUL AND REVENGEFUL

allows a lot of lee-way in deciding retributional punishment. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by MorganDeWolfe08/17/15

Nearly Perfect!... 5* Story

Rape should be a Capital Offense and Gang Rape...well there just isn't a punishment extreme enough!
They all got off easy as far as I'm concerned.
Morgan DeWolfe

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by Anonymous12/09/15

Gang Rape Should Be An Automatic death Sentence

Every individual who participated in the rape, even the bartender and the women, should have been given the Death Penalty. A rapist is a terrorist. Rapist should be sent to Gitmo before being executed. That includes the women. Five stars and added to my Favorites List.

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by Goodhue01/25/16

Too Over the Top!

- Yes,he loved his wife.
- Yes,he was also a sick fuck!- His revenge was too disgusting to make this story an acceptable read. Maybe his revenge could have been just a tad more subtle.
- Kind of felt like I was reading a story about Michael Corleone vacationing at HOSTLE in Slovacia,and ripping people apart. NOT SEXY,at all!!!

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by Anonymous03/21/16

@Goodhue 01/25/16

Over the top you say? So if a group of guys held you down and raped your ass over and over you'd what? Apologize for not being tighter, offer to make it up to them by using your mouth as only a wimp truly could, beg for more after finally realizing your secret sexual fantasy? Your type of modern "man" disgusts me. You'll bemoan punishing rapists and believe pedophiles can be "cured"
Please, please, please don't breed, mankind has enough failures without adding your weak corrupted DNA to the pool.

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by sbrooks10304/01/16

Over The Top?

Maybe, but in a good way!

And I approve of not going into intimate details of the torture sessions - we got enough about what happened to them.

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by sinsational8304/20/16

Over the top MYASS

There isn't anything over the top about the restitution that he dished out. I, being the person that I am, given the amount of money he received I would have done the same thing. Only I would have let them know why it was happening to them. I would just inform them it was for the rape of " that woman " years ago. Let them know this is their payback.

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by Anonymous04/23/16

I like.

Quite satisfying.

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by tazz31704/23/16

AFTER YOUR EGO HAS BEEN SATURATED

now you have to watch out for the ID. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Goodhue05/07/16

@ Anonymous 03/21/16 (A chicken-shit douchebag)

- Firstly,put your name on your comments,asshole! A big man,hiding behind your "Anonymous" cover. You're laughable!
- Secondly,revenge does not have to emulate "Silence of the Lambs" to be effective! The guy in the story was as bad as the assholes involved in the rape. Now there's a sicko who should NOT reproduce. (And come to think of it,neither should an asshole like you,chicken-shit, "Anonymous 03/21/16"!)

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by sbrooks103x06/29/16

Re-Reading

The wife who said "You know you want it", should have ended up in a Tijuana donkey show!

I've often wondered why more women when being forced to give oral sex didn't do the same as here, bite down and DON'T LET GO!!

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by Anonymous08/11/16

im not that anon

but a good skinning can be so refreshing for the soul

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by Oldfart7208/20/16

Luv it

Anyone who thinks this is overreacting is not normal. I probably would have had a few of them killed slowly. I don't turn the other cheek. Eye for an eye is my belief.

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by Tw0Cr0ws08/23/16

liked it

This reminded me of what I heard was done to a rapist years ago:

He was taken to a curve in the railroad tracks, nailed to a tie with a spike through his penis and scrotum, left there with a dull rusty dirty knife - an hour before the train was due there.

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by Oldfart7209/14/16

Never loved

Goodhue evidently has never loved a person that much. It's too bad. I hope he does someday

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by Anonymous12/03/16

Goodhue

You think you are just and kind ,but you lack the empathy to walk a mile in anothers shoes.

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by Anonymous12/04/16

Pretty Dark For Me

Not to sure about this type of revenge. I think they went a bit to far on the punishment here.

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by Anonymous12/09/16

Nice. 5 Star Justice.

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by Goodhue01/11/17

It seems that a number of the commentators seem to think that in order to show your love for a wife you need to assault and maime in order to exact revenge,(*And I suppose those same dipshits think that the jury should excuse their crude,law-breaking uncivilized methods of revenge when they're found "guilty" at trial.
I don't need to walk in the shoes of a monster and be separated from my wife by a long jail stint in order to show my love for my wife,when something more subtle and clever can get the job done.
(And by the way,all of you "tough guy" commentators who say you'd do the same thing and that I'm a wimp for not agreeing,when push came to shove you would NOT do it! You guys talk the talk but I seriously doubt if you'd walk the walk! (In anybody's shoes!)

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