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by Syndra Lynn03/02/14

needs trimming

try telling this interesting tale in a free form? some of the rhymes feel forced adding extra weigh to the poem.

less is more.

Write on!

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by Magnetron03/02/14

Syndra Lynn

Thanks for the advice. She's about 8 years old. I recently dusted it off, tweaked and twerked a few words before submitting it.

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