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Gr8 story , i loved it , wish i had a twin sister .. Keep it up an hope too see more of your twin sisters stories
Several of your stories have been excellent. Much as others complain that they are too short, I think they work as one-pagers, leaving the reader wondering about what is to come, even if it will never be described for them.
This part of the story wasn't as compelling on it's own, for some reason, though. I'm not sure how to articulate what is missing (in comparison to the first chapter, and some of your other stories, so this is a high bar.) It feels like it could have been left out, and just jumped to chapter 3, where you would just mention what had preceded it.
I recently wrote a story that is similar in nature to this one. If someone didn’t know better, they might think I borrowed my storyline from you. But I didn’t.
I’m giving your stories five star ratings ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️