All Comments on 'Porn & Masturbation Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
your stories get better all...

the time. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
again well done

I will definatly be looking foward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Damn

I wish I had a twin!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Gr8 story

Gr8 story , i loved it , wish i had a twin sister .. Keep it up an hope too see more of your twin sisters stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
1,2 here comes 3

better then one

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Several of your stories have been excellent. Much as others complain that they are too short, I think they work as one-pagers, leaving the reader wondering about what is to come, even if it will never be described for them.

This part of the story wasn't as compelling on it's own, for some reason, though. I'm not sure how to articulate what is missing (in comparison to the first chapter, and some of your other stories, so this is a high bar.) It feels like it could have been left out, and just jumped to chapter 3, where you would just mention what had preceded it.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Ok

Mot great

When do add the brother!

Mr_BradyMr_Bradyalmost 2 years ago

I recently wrote a story that is similar in nature to this one. If someone didn’t know better, they might think I borrowed my storyline from you. But I didn’t.

I’m giving your stories five star ratings ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

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