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Vocabulary Quiz:
Opaque: NOT able to be seen through; NOT transparent: the windows were opaque with steam.
Perhaps you intended to use:
Translucent: allowing light, but not detailed images, to pass through; semitransparent: fry until the onions become translucent.
Hot! But...
What's with "the rules" about two sketches and first and only that Steve can't break? Is he OCD or something? Hot nonetheless.
HOT! HOT!
Loved the tale. Hope for another chapter.
I get annoyed at Author's whom presume to write about Australian characters......
Especially Americans that try it!
Presumption
I get irritated by readers who presume too much myself--who presume they know all Australian characters and who falsely assume that this story wasn't edited and vetted by an Australian. It's true, though, that I don't write my stories for the presumptive anal retentive.
Very nice, hope to see more!
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