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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/02/14

Vocabulary Quiz:

Opaque: NOT able to be seen through; NOT transparent: the windows were opaque with steam.

Perhaps you intended to use:
Translucent: allowing light, but not detailed images, to pass through; semitransparent: fry until the onions become translucent.

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by Anonymous03/03/14

Hot! But...

What's with "the rules" about two sketches and first and only that Steve can't break? Is he OCD or something? Hot nonetheless.

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by CuriousPete03/03/14

HOT! HOT!

Loved the tale. Hope for another chapter.

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by Anonymous03/03/14

I get annoyed at Author's whom presume to write about Australian characters......

Especially Americans that try it!

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by sr71plt03/04/14

Presumption

I get irritated by readers who presume too much myself--who presume they know all Australian characters and who falsely assume that this story wasn't edited and vetted by an Australian. It's true, though, that I don't write my stories for the presumptive anal retentive.

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by Anonymous03/05/14

Very nice, hope to see more!

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