She has a thing for Kellen already and obviously Kellen has a thing for her too. Big mistake because I think they both will want more and Mujib isn't going to like it. This could cause problems??! Excited to see where you'll go with this. Honestly you are so talented, imaginative and it reads really well. I love your writing. Keep it up, I'm stalking the page for new stories and updates everyday. Good job.
Your stories all have the same layout to them. If I didn't know any better I'd say you were married once and had someone on the side. It seems like to me you know a lot about being with two people at once, like this goes beyond your imagination or something. The thing i dont get is why. Why does each character have to have their cake and eat it to? Why couldn't she just be with Caleb if she was so strongly attracted to him, and it seems they have more in common anyway. It still was a great read though, i just wish it was her being with him. Thanks for the stories though once again they really are interesting. T.L.IRVINIRVIN
Hey EM,
I have a story with a character named Monae, anyway to answer your question. Most of my stories are about having the cake and eating it too. I see no other way to live life, especially in the fantasy world!!!
And also I don't know if I put it in the description but this story is about a relationship that involves two males and one female, one that goes through some trials, but ends up HEA or something like it. Not all of them do, but this one is finished and no one ends up too hurt anyway.
Thanks for reading!
English
Too late now. Should've used a stranger, using people you know can get messy and awkward.
Oh Oh
She has a thing for Kellen already and obviously Kellen has a thing for her too. Big mistake because I think they both will want more and Mujib isn't going to like it. This could cause problems??! Excited to see where you'll go with this. Honestly you are so talented, imaginative and it reads really well. I love your writing. Keep it up, I'm stalking the page for new stories and updates everyday. Good job.
predictable
Your stories all have the same layout to them. If I didn't know any better I'd say you were married once and had someone on the side. It seems like to me you know a lot about being with two people at once, like this goes beyond your imagination or something. The thing i dont get is why. Why does each character have to have their cake and eat it to? Why couldn't she just be with Caleb if she was so strongly attracted to him, and it seems they have more in common anyway. It still was a great read though, i just wish it was her being with him. Thanks for the stories though once again they really are interesting. T.L.IRVINIRVIN
Edith Monae
Hey EM,
I have a story with a character named Monae, anyway to answer your question. Most of my stories are about having the cake and eating it too. I see no other way to live life, especially in the fantasy world!!!
And also I don't know if I put it in the description but this story is about a relationship that involves two males and one female, one that goes through some trials, but ends up HEA or something like it. Not all of them do, but this one is finished and no one ends up too hurt anyway.
Thanks for reading!
WOW
Please say that you will continue this story
PLEASE!!!!
Please continue this story. There has to be more....gotta see where this leads.
Girl got lucky on her Day!
Be very careful who you invite into your bedroom--they may not ever want to leave.
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