All Comments on 'Whatever You Like Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Cute! I like it so far

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More...

More please!!!

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101about 10 years ago
So far

I think this story has a lot of potential to be really fun and sweet. But I personally am getting so confused with who's with who and who's who. The women seem like all one person. Lol they have the same tastes in clothes and (I know it's only the first chapter) but the same personality too. So I hope with the next chapter you can make everyone very distinguishable through their character and traits etc. I can't wait to see where you'll take this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This is wonderful

I can't wait til the next chapter.

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

It seems like a lot going on just in the first chapter. The girls definitely seem all cut from the same cookie mold. The guys have a bit of a personality difference between them. I think I will get the girls confused if there isn't more differences amongst them. It's still early yet so I will wait and see.

Hopefully Takeshi will just walk away so Morgan can see The Man With The Iron Fists. Let those fools look ignorant by themselves. I know it will be hard for him to back away and it doesn't mean he is a pussy for ignoring their remarks.

Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2about 10 years ago
More please

It was just gettin interesting. Hopefully there will be chapters. Is all 4 couples the main characters? I wonder if one of males will hav iron fist or all. I'm just trying to figure out where title fit into storyline? Hmm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

LOVED IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!

4CBA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Tell me when you're ready to begin.

What was this? It's barely more than the beginning of an idea. Next time, rather than posting it so early, hold onto your writing until it's ready to present a story, not just the idea of one.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
Continue

You got something here, I love your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
FINISH IT!!

PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE TOO!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story!!!

I'm so excited to read more chapters on this :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What?

This was a seriously good story; why didn't you complete it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please finish the story

I’m excited to see where this story can go, but you left us on an extreme cliffhanger please finish the story!

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