The Last Princess of Lorrea Ch. 14

Long legs

Enough of the lovey dovey bit, now hurry up and get to the rumpy..lol
Time for some more hawt spanky secks. :-)
Either that or bring back my mate Caspian pdq.he knows what to do with it...
Think our Henry is well and truly bitten with this little minx.
Roll on 15

15?!

Make her love him back

Lol ....

Liked this chapter alot ... really sweet but masterfuljinns was hilarious rumpy bit haha

Eyes wide shut...

It's time to let Elena see the truth...that she is loved! Please lead her into this warrior king's arms. He has been waiting long enough...I know I have.;--)

Gonna be a bitch but I think Henry is an ass and our princess has gone soft. She's moved by getting her own belongings as a wedding gift(how kind of him to take it in the first place) and more or less has to wear a ring with the crest of the family that murdered her own. Henry is so insensitive that he won't even allow her to deal with her trauma and seems rather eager to get her into his bed whether she wants to or not. She should make it very clear that if he hadn't treated her like a possession in the first place this never would have happend and that she only accepted his proposel because he is the lesser of two evils, not because she loves him. Nor should she, she never had and will have a choice in the matter.

sigh......what a wimpy king!

after 14 chapters, he still had not bedded her.....and wait.....kind, old king Henry blushes and stammers.......cute!

Sigh....

These one page chapters are killing me! I need more!

*warm smile*
i love the fact that she is starting to realize she loves him. And hopefully they will move the wedding up so that they can truly consummate their feelings. Can't wait for chapter 15.

Short and sweet ...

I really like this chapter even though it is short and sweet. Really like how Henry is helping Elena copes with the rape such as sharing the same bed but not doing anything. This way he can allays her fears and insecurities without making any demand on her. Caspian is dead. Let him stay dead.

wow!!!!

1 word.....SUPERB..........

My reaction to the story so far

I just love the story between Henry and Elena. At first I was browsing for something erotic to read to get off. But when I found your series I didn't care any more; I just couldn't wait to see what happened! I haven't been able to put it down since! There's just something so enjoyable when you finally find a good book that you hope will never end. I looked all over for a link to your published books but I guess you haven't done that yet. That's so sad! I was really looking forward to reading more of your work. I will definitely be buying it if you make more.

I can't believe the story has been so arousing and indepth and Henry and Elena haven't even had sex yet! I love the build up. It makes small things so intense and meaningful! Like when he said her name for the first time while she was drunk my heart skipped a beat. I wished she had heard it. I read it again and again.

And I was so happy at work that day I read about Henry's proposal. If you turn this into a book I bet you could elaborate a little more on that crucial transition in their dynamic and his opinion of her.

The most arousing part to me is all the ways Henry turns her on against her will and fhe way she reluctant is falling in love. The fact that she hated him so much initially made me so eager to get to the amazing scene where Henry would finally take her virginity concentually. The story was so perfect in my head.

I felt shocked and discouraged when Caspian got her instead. I thought there really couldn't be a happy conclusion after that besides the satisfaction of some horrible fate for Caspian. I do really wish his demise was more degrading. I know there are people who love that dark rape stuff but I get more turned on by the reluctant enjoyment Elena has with Henry than the horror with Caspian.

But now that Elena has been through such disappointment I feel more attached to her. Her thought process as she deals with her experience feels realistic and I feel like I'm healing with her. Henry's love feels even more meaningful now that she is not a fanticiful virgin. It makes me appreciate my own wonderful sexual experiences I get to have even though my first time was ruined too. If she can push though such a spoiled and degrading experience and still come away with happiness and true love, why should I really feel so sorry for myself? I shouldn't dwell on the fact that I lost an idealistic happy ending for myself when I'm perfectly capable of a different, and more powerful happy ending.

I hope that Elena does eventually get to experience that sensation of giving herself to someone she respects, to be taken sexually. That is the truest, vulnerable submission in my opinion.

Wow, totally blown away by LittleParadise's feedback!

I must tell you, that I thoroughly enjoyed your feedback - never before have I received such an in-depth comment. I greatly appreciate it!

love it

U knw I hav had a bad experience too...well m not a princess but I did hav a caspian in my life..not long ago did I find my henry..and I can relate to your story. ...funnily enuf....evn he hasnt touched me....n waiting. ...

I'm so sorry

Firstly, I'm so sorry, LittleParadise and Anon, that you both have had a real life Caspians in your life. My writing is pure fiction - not derived from personal experience, thank God.

LittleParadise , I'm glad that you find my story to be so touching and especially - cathartic.

please quicken ur pace

Please post d next story soon

Slowly typing out those pages...

I know... the wait is awful!
So far I've got 10 pages of a google doc, so that's around 1-2 pages here... I want to give you guys a meatier chapter this time around, so bear with me... (did I just say meatier? is that even the correct spelling?)

Meatier

I believe that is the correct spelling... now is it going to be literally as well as metaphorically "meatier," especially concerning one very patient and romantic Prince Henry? ;)

hi...

Waiting eagerly for your next chapter. .......plwase quicken your pace......please please please please

Getting caught up in the dialogue

I'm bouncing from scene to scene... as soon as I get closer to writing a particularly juicy scene, another scene full of witty dialogue pops into my head... it must be some form of ADD for writers :) Not that I really consider myself a writer...
But so far 15 google doc pages - which probably translates into roughly 3 pages and more of literotica...

Daily routine...

It's become a habit for me to check practically once a day to see if there is a new chapter posted. Love your work and writing style. While the wait is driving me crazy, take the time you need. Very excited for the next chapter!

Thanks... so far so good.

I've written 20 google doc pages which if I'm not mistaken may translate to 5 literotica pages (fingers crossed). I'm just wondering whether to split them up into separate chapters or have a really long one... I know readers love long chapters...
I would tell you what exactly the problem is, but then I'd be giving away key plotlines and that wouldn't be fair now, would it?

Long chapter please!!

We've been really patient and good. Long chapter soon please!

I feel a lynching in my near future...

DRUMROLL PLEASE!