I have to say that I really love this story! I'm not sure if it's because I worked with a similar woman that was also a seasonal slut only! At the company holiday party she would get very drunk and very slutty but only once a year!
The one note to the stories (all 4) is that the grammar is bad at times. But the only other thing I'm missing is a little detail into the way the players are feeling. It does have some emotion peppered in but there are time I wish the story would go further. In this story I would love to follow the couple into their hotel room and play out the resulting conversation and inevitable sexual explosion. But I wish that the couple would talk and tease about their experiences. Maybe add the time where his wife is selecting her clothes for the once a year fling. Giving her husband the choice of selecting or limiting her clothes. I loved the idea of her teasing her boss with another coworker and almost making it a game of dares! I think that exploring the angle with her boss and the other coworker Jimmy would be some wonderful detail to add!
But once again, I have to say that I really loved this story and can't wait to read more!
Thank you!
Cheers!
English
Fairly good, but...
I'm waiting for this prim and proper 42 year old slut strips naked at one of these parties and pulls a train!
binge reading all 4 because they were so great!
I have to say that I really love this story! I'm not sure if it's because I worked with a similar woman that was also a seasonal slut only! At the company holiday party she would get very drunk and very slutty but only once a year!
The one note to the stories (all 4) is that the grammar is bad at times. But the only other thing I'm missing is a little detail into the way the players are feeling. It does have some emotion peppered in but there are time I wish the story would go further. In this story I would love to follow the couple into their hotel room and play out the resulting conversation and inevitable sexual explosion. But I wish that the couple would talk and tease about their experiences. Maybe add the time where his wife is selecting her clothes for the once a year fling. Giving her husband the choice of selecting or limiting her clothes. I loved the idea of her teasing her boss with another coworker and almost making it a game of dares! I think that exploring the angle with her boss and the other coworker Jimmy would be some wonderful detail to add!
But once again, I have to say that I really loved this story and can't wait to read more!
Thank you!
Cheers!
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