This was very very good, and, for a first submission, incredibly well-crafted. Welcome to Literotica and please bring us more of this high-quality work. Five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Lovely and pitch perfect. This story left me sated and insanely curious.
What a wonderfully written first chapter. Every word is perfect. I can't wait to learn of their history, and of what's to come for them.
You are all lovely! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted chapter 2, so please be on the lookout!
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Excellent work!
This was very very good, and, for a first submission, incredibly well-crafted. Welcome to Literotica and please bring us more of this high-quality work. Five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Very nicely crafted!!
Lovely and pitch perfect. This story left me sated and insanely curious.
Amazing start
What a wonderfully written first chapter. Every word is perfect. I can't wait to learn of their history, and of what's to come for them.
Thank you all!
You are all lovely! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted chapter 2, so please be on the lookout!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Pet Ch. 01 or
More submissions by estelledarkbloom.