All Comments on 'Cream'

A good start.

I usually am not one for one page submissions. They tend to lack substance and reflect a lazy approach to story telling. You Dawn, truly are the exception. Thank you for a great start to an intriguing story!

This is erotic in the best sense of the word! Great writing, Dawnj!

Has always been my dream to be in the same position as the male character in this story.

What a wimp.His wife rings to ask him to let a teenager fuck her and he doesn't say no