All Comments on 'Baby Sister'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AurimazAurimazabout 10 years ago

A rushed work again.

Dar_JisboDar_Jisboabout 10 years agoAuthor
I've anonymized it

When I was in high school [mumble] years ago, one of my best friends was "Harry" in this story. I've changed the names and enough details so people can't figure out who he and the sisters are unless they already know. [Yes, "Harry" and "Nell" are still together: their two kids are now young adults.]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice story

What a nice story! I would have given the more mature Harry some hair on that muscular chest, and given both of them a bit more in terms of description of their bodies. A good reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good short story

This type of thing happens quite often. It just develops from familiarity to something more.

TwilightfanTwilightfanabout 10 years ago
Wish They All Were Like Harry

If only all men not only cared for their GF little sister, but came to love her like he did...

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