An interesting development between friends. It definitely deserves a follow up to see if Dee learn her lesson and if Fran is as 'respectful' as Tom says she is.
Fucking bastards raped her...no ifs and or buts...no means no...fricking doms need to stop breathing my air...your like rabid dogs....which need to be put down!
Take this to non con...
There is power shifts and then there is forced...
Tom cheated on his wife, what a dick!
And the husband is just short of being a cuckhold.
The lesson learned is that there in no communication in this marriage and that is a shame! Packed bags and legal papers to follow.
To the two nay sayers - it is a story. Let the Author write it the way he wants to. Do not attack him for his story. He did not say it was partly true or even true. It is his story and enjoy the story or don't either way leave a nice comment or a general comment like - it was not very good, but do not attack him for the way he wrote the story. BDSM is not Rape. If you dont like the story just tell him - I didnot like it. Personally, I liked the story.
But ...barber...read the story too and though the comment on rape might have been strong to was still their comment to make. As for the shame comment...huh..nail meet head...This is the bdsm section and ssc or rack was not in place dare I say... SAFEWORD!!!! Yes their story to tell, but I do agree that non con would have been a better fit. The least there should have been author notes explaining that this was the beginning of a future bdsm relationship and that it boarded on non con and all or most future chapters would reflect that. I am not trying to be the lit police but was is right is right and everyone including you and me have a right to express our feelings. As far as nice words, really, this is not a hippe commune. People are giving of themselves and I personally am grateful, but as in all aspects of life honesty is always the best policy. Oh... and communication in any format!
While I respect your opinion on this matter have you never heard of erotic play or BDSM of even S & M. Spanking kink been around for a long time. As for Rape all Dee had to do was get up and walk out the door and it would have been the end of it. PERIOD.
Clearly the people who are against this story does not like to be spanked and I respect that. I would never force anyone into something they are not agreeable with first.
English
Interesting
An interesting development between friends. It definitely deserves a follow up to see if Dee learn her lesson and if Fran is as 'respectful' as Tom says she is.
bdsm is a handy name for rape isn't it
Fucking bastards raped her...no ifs and or buts...no means no...fricking doms need to stop breathing my air...your like rabid dogs....which need to be put down!
For shame
Take this to non con...
There is power shifts and then there is forced...
Tom cheated on his wife, what a dick!
And the husband is just short of being a cuckhold.
The lesson learned is that there in no communication in this marriage and that is a shame! Packed bags and legal papers to follow.
Need to lighten up! It's a story!
To the two nay sayers - it is a story. Let the Author write it the way he wants to. Do not attack him for his story. He did not say it was partly true or even true. It is his story and enjoy the story or don't either way leave a nice comment or a general comment like - it was not very good, but do not attack him for the way he wrote the story. BDSM is not Rape. If you dont like the story just tell him - I didnot like it. Personally, I liked the story.
excuse me...
But ...barber...read the story too and though the comment on rape might have been strong to was still their comment to make. As for the shame comment...huh..nail meet head...This is the bdsm section and ssc or rack was not in place dare I say... SAFEWORD!!!! Yes their story to tell, but I do agree that non con would have been a better fit. The least there should have been author notes explaining that this was the beginning of a future bdsm relationship and that it boarded on non con and all or most future chapters would reflect that. I am not trying to be the lit police but was is right is right and everyone including you and me have a right to express our feelings. As far as nice words, really, this is not a hippe commune. People are giving of themselves and I personally am grateful, but as in all aspects of life honesty is always the best policy. Oh... and communication in any format!
So for a happy home life and wife
You rape and assault her? Hmmm..... Seems like a recipe for jail and divorce.
Oh come on people
While I respect your opinion on this matter have you never heard of erotic play or BDSM of even S & M. Spanking kink been around for a long time. As for Rape all Dee had to do was get up and walk out the door and it would have been the end of it. PERIOD.
Clearly the people who are against this story does not like to be spanked and I respect that. I would never force anyone into something they are not agreeable with first.
Thanks for the read,
John
fiction
Its all fictional
let the writer be
I enjoyed the work
some do need disapline to see they're rude
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