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Desires within Young Girls Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/04/14

too short

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by worshipper62203/04/14

Could be longer........

....but, it has a nice twist to it. Keep it going.

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by Averygoodlay03/04/14

I gave it a three

I gave it a three, didn't deserve anymore.
Come on five chapters of BS, a slow build up is one thing but your taking this teasing chapters too far, good thing it's not on paper it would be a waste of paper.

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by Anonymous03/06/14

Well written

Plot is interesting - suspenseful. English is excellent within the context. Please go on!

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