Nicky knows what she wants and won't settle for less. Actually she did the lad a favor by letting him down easy
Well-written but not enough sex. Purely on writing it's a B+, but you're sort of wasting people's time if you don't put this in the no-sex section. This was a sexy story, but it had no sex.
Don't listen to the other dullard's critique; this was fantastic! An excellent opening salvo; I keep checking for part two. It was stellar!
A good start, but it ended before anything actually happened.
keep up the good work
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Fun story
Nicky knows what she wants and won't settle for less. Actually she did the lad a favor by letting him down easy
Well-written but not enough sex. Purely on writing it's a B+, but you're sort of wasting people's time if you don't put this in the no-sex section.
This was a sexy story, but it had no sex.
Fantastic.
Don't listen to the other dullard's critique; this was fantastic! An excellent opening salvo; I keep checking for part two. It was stellar!
Promising
A good start, but it ended before anything actually happened.
very nice
keep up the good work
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