All Comments on 'Life's Little Curves Ch. 05'

by SmilinsweetAngel95

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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

I hope they don't have any drama no time soon. They deserve good things right now.

William smythWilliam smythabout 10 years ago
Well done

A nice 5 star addition to this fine series.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter--and those to follow it.

SmilinsweetAngel95SmilinsweetAngel95about 10 years agoAuthor
Chapter 6

I just submitted chapter six, it should be here in a few day. There is sex in this chapter, and there will be in the next chapter as well. I am looking for an editor if anyone knows someone, or they are an editor themselves. Thank you for everything, I can't wait to see what you guys think about the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
When he had saw

When he had SEEN!

Where do you go to school? clearly they don't teach grammar! You shouldn't need an editor for GRAMMAR, right through this series, you use 'took' instead of 'taken', 'did' instead of 'done', that's just a few grammatical errors!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
To another Annonymous

Get over yourself dickhead, what are ya the word police ya fool, I see the story not the mistakes and you know what the author is conveying anyway ya dick.

brijeonbrijeonabout 10 years ago
somewhat lost

What does Tyler do, I know what I think. Why can't Vince go to school on GI bill. Did Tyler get monthly payment from the marine's. Vince seems like he loves Nevaeh more than life but I'm confused by Neveah. No sex ,passion. Neaveah's obsession. Side note: I thought this was a 5 chapter story, if I knew it was longer I would have waited until all was completed because I hate to wait

KelisKlauseKelisKlauseover 9 years ago
Vince!

Keep up the amazing chapters! FUCK what other people got to say, your doing phenomenal without an editor. So far I'm in love with Vince, he's such a caring individual and he tries hard, but I wish he would get a little Angrier at Neaveh with her little issues with work ... He's a man a marine no less, he should of put his foot down so to say lol ... Anyways love the story!!! Keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
?????

5 chapters and no sex......lost interest .....bye

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