Marcus and Dad Pt. 01

Woah- that was surprisingly hot.

Not sure your level of pervertedness will be appreciated on this site but I for one found it incredibly nasty hot. It was short but sweet- kind like how the narrator's toot was. I want to read more. Let him get in there and rim Daddy's fart hole and keep the gas coming....right up the son's nose and across his tongue. (I once had a dude accidentally fart right in my mouth when I was rimming him and I came almost instantly.) Good job you freak.

WTF?

Go find a site that caters for this weird, sick shit and quit polluting this one; your pathetic scores should indicate just how much the readers here don't like this kind of ass-obsessed garbage - find a scat site and indulge your shitbox fantasies there, read and understand the category, you mental midget...

Great Story!!

I hope there is sequel in works. I think it would be be hot if his dad takes a hot steaming dump into his sons hungry mouth.

WTF??!?? If there could be a negative score, I would have opted for that. Fucking gross.

Amazing vivid imagery

Your lack of talent is eclipsed only by your selection of subject matter.

You may want to try a plot twist and have the son run over by a semi roaring out of papa's ass...

19. That pretty much says it all. I agree with one other commentator : sick and Whiskey Tango Foxtrot???

Great

My nephew and I do this all the time. Funny as hell. Fuck all the nay-sayers!!!

Comments better than story. Are you sure you are 19. Sounded more like something from an immature 12 year old. The good thing was it was short so I only wasted 2 minutes of my life. Do not continue or write another story. You have about as much talent as you have cock, little.

Da fuq is this? ):

wow

Nice start, now what else you got. Who gets fucked first.

Awesome

I like this chapter. Fuck all those who don't!! Keep writing this!!

No.

Please, for the love of all that is arousing, never attempt to author another erotic story again.

That was fucking hilarious!

More please.

What

This is garbage. Please do not write any more. Find another site to post this to, it's disgusting and just bad.

Stop!!!!!

Dont continue this shit was lame and nasty u sick fucker!

keep on writing

Well done! My dad and I share close-up farts regularly. Always fucking sexy!

its not the worst

Ok so don't listen to all the negative people keep writing and make it longer :)

Don't listen to those dumb farts (get it, farts, haha I crack myself up)

This is really good and keep going 'don't listen to those dumb farts' because they are the ones that searched this up in the first place and decided to read it so to put it nicely tell them to get their head out of your ass. Anyway the suspension is killing me so hurry up and update!

It's good

I'm not a big fan of flatulence or things like that, but this turns me on so much. Please continue, haters gonna hate, just keep doing what you're doing :D

Not Bad

I hope there's scat involved in this. That would be hot, not enough of that here.

Write more... I love fart play, and it's the sort of unsuspecting father/son activity that can be so hot!