Tears of the Fallen Ch. 13

Seeing stars

Five. Great chapter.

great chapter

Even if the whole chapter was about a character I don't like. Sigh I do however love Liam and am so happy to see him and his beasts finally starting to mesh and become balanced!

Its about time my insomnia worked as an advantage! I have been a fan of yours for years and have read and reread all of your stories. This is on my top five lists for fav chapters. Outstanding!

welcome back

enjoyed the chapter very much thank you

Can I respectfully ...

Not loathe, loath.
Not millennia, millenium.
There was one other, but I wasn't keeping score then and it escapes me.

Great!

Great as always Jaz.

'Gotcha' !! Loved that comment from Liam's vampire, and the fact that now they are now on the same page. I like that it seemed to slightly change him and how she see's him - it's going to get delicious, I can't wait !!
Loved the whole chapter, as always :)

The more of Liam's story I hear the more I want. But I think the reason I want more is that I want to see him healed from what has haunted him his whole life. To be able to be out amount the pack and not need his cousins protection would be great. To have

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Thanks

Thank you Jaz. Well worth the wait even if the anticipation is torture, and you torture so well. Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas

Still the best!!!!

My God, you get better and better (if that's possible). This goes to show you why this lady is always at the top of the list and owns more than half of the Hall of Fame.

You know Jaz did that on purpose

Just like Liam's vampire she is sitting back looking at all her readers and like bam gotcha you know you wont stop reading these.

Holy Mackerel!!!!!

That was just such a fantastic chapter! It definitely makes up for the fact that its been sooooo loooooooooooong since you last posted ;)

I agree with others = one of your best chapters yet. And its another one of your key turnaround moments in your stories. Reasa starts to feel compassion but also gets increasingly turned on by Liam's acceptance of his vampiric side (all which she brought about, ha ha!!)

I love it, thank you Jaz :) Fantastic writing.

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more more more

It's been so long

5 starrs

Wonderful!

I'm surprised by my complete immersion in your story - since this a genre that I don't usually read. The flow of your words has captivated me. Thank you for an enthralling chapter. Well done!

Really!!!!

Really Jaz after all that wait only 3 pages???? I need more. Hurry please!!!

Ponderings

Liam's alter was described as wearing all black. His Were and human were calmer. Made me think of Kothi, he was introduced wearing all black, what if his vampire has to accept his cat and his human. Maybe that is the issue he has.He, also is fragmented and torn. Once his cat and human surge forward, he might gain balance. Well his little bit of human he has in him.

addicted

I love this saga please don't stop writing.I need more..oh and Calebs's address if you have it! Lol

You go this chapter to me at just the right time. Time to read, time for my coffee.. Excellent. :)

Ooooh

I'm liking this chapter! Good for Liam! Now back to Pietro & Cassia! :)

Wait a minute?!

Is Liam's Vampire a "Bad Boy Gangsta" :-0) Didn't our parents warn us about those type of guys? HA!!!

Jaz, you freaking rock!!!!

You know that European group over there, they are not a match for the pissed of vampire side of the Valorac. Imagine if Liam or Kothi bring out their inner annihilation, do you think there will even be ashes? We don't even know about the others? Liam & Kothi seem the most imbalanced, but you know Elina has bound a part of herself for the love of her cousin. Who knows what the backlash of that might be. Especially if a loved one is threatened. I am just pondering. Jaz, just keep doing what you do, your fans love you and your amazing brain waves :-)

Thanks...

Please keep them coming....

AWESOME!

WOW You certainly added spice to Liam & Reasa. I can't wait to read more.....

Aw Crap

When I found this series a little over a month ago, I went to the comments page to see if others liked it as well as I did. I must admit that I gloated over the fact that I could just go on to the next chapter. Now I am caught up....aw crap

Tears

Honestly I am shocked every time you make me cry. This is such an amazing story that I need more. I was sick last year and read everything you wrote. Now I'm a Jaz junkie waiting for more. Please don't lose focus. Please hurry. My inner vamp needs more. You are truly gifted and this storyline could easily be on the NY Times best seller list. Thank you for sharing. Truly a devoted fan.

I have been waiting so long for this! I loved it!

This chapter works

I'm feeling the bad boy, alpha vampire inside of Liam. I haven't been a fan of either Liam or Reasa, though I like the dimension they add to the story. Liam has always seemed too weak and soft to me. How can he get a powerful former vampire to love him, let alone like him, if he is busy cowering behind everyone else for protection? And Reasa just seemed too irredeemable to me... her hatred of Varcolac too strong to even make her worthy of being mated to one. The way that Reasa hates Liam and all of the Varcolac makes it seem unbelievable that she could be his mate and that she will eventually fall for him. But the fact that Liam has a more confident and dangerous vampire inside of him that he is trying to wrangle in and the fact that Reasa is clearly and FINALLY effected by Liam works for the story. This storyline makes it more probable that Reasa and Liam will eventually end up together. Nice work.

AHHHHMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jazzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE Liams' inner vamp! He's So SCARY/WOW/HOT!!!! Definitely going to make some BAD times for the Euro trash vamps between him & Kothi!!!! HAHAHAHA :)
You are FANTABULOUS and I IMPLORE you and your muse to keep on doing what you are!! LOVE Your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love, Love, Love everything about this chapter!
You captivate and hold me breathless aching for more.
PLEASE don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!
As always, thank you for sharing your gift with us!

Elina Fan

LOVE, LOVE the back story of how Elina sacrificed her happiness for Liam. They are my favorite characters. Cant wait to see how badass and super powerful Elina really is!! Keep writing for her Jaz!

Yeah! Welcome back!

Miracle of miracles- you managed to soften my stance towards Reasa. I still don't like her but I don't hate her either.

Looking forward to more time with our other potential couples!

How?

You made it were Reasa is likeable, that's amazing.

Great stuff!

You never really know a person until you understand where they have been and what has happened to them. It was easy to judge Reasa before we had a peak into her past experiences. Good writing.

Finally

I missed this chapter as I was looking in the new stories section , great chapter I can't wait for when Reesa finally gives into Liam m beginning to like her.
Great work pls don't make us wait too long for next one x

Hail Highness

I read this several days ago, however delayed commenting, your plot development is amazing. Who could ever like Reasa? Well now thanks to you, almost everyone. I have said it before, however I will say it again, Jaz you paint wonderful word pictures. Sure hope you wrote a lot in England.

At Last!

I have been waiting for this to continue it seems a long time ago and it is worth it. I do hope you upload more as I can't wait. Now I am sure I will be having a hard time to sleep imagining what the chapter will be.

whoa

I think your idea about fragmented minds is really accurate

Very Nice

Thank you for continuing this great story.

"gotcha"

ohhhhhh shit!! most awesome part of the whole story! can't wait for more!!!

Loved it

Dude I love ur stories and can't wait to read more.

Hope the next chapter wont be long... can't wait to read Chapter14//.

:(

I started FTI about 2 weeks ago. I just got to here and now im sad that i can't keep reading and they're not finished.:((( great work.:)

-Niki

I wish I could buy this series in hard copy, Tears has brought me to tears yet again. You my lady are a great writer and I can't wait for the next chapter or story.

Wow!!!!!!!

Hot! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! Loving it!

love it more please

please please please more. I love your work. chapter 14 please.

LISTEN

EVERYONE LOOKING FOR HER NEXT CHAPTER IN THE STORY PLEASE READ HER BIO. IF YOU DON'T THEN DON'T COMPLAIN THAT SHE HASN'T POSTED.

Happy Birthday Jaz

I have been avoiding you. Not because I don't like you, but because I adore you. You just write too fucking slow. However, I adore your world. Your characters come alive in your stories and in my mind. Keep on writing darlin. Chuf, chuf....

beautiful imagery! CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP .

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