You are off to a good start,but your grammar ,and comma period placements really need work,
Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it because of how the man can give her that much pleasure and how much they both enjoyed the passionate sex.-stef
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You are off to a good start,but your grammar ,and comma period placements really need work,
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Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it because of how the man can give her that much pleasure and how much they both enjoyed the passionate sex.-stef
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