Not a sexy sensual story, but a moment of revelation for Ali. Not a lot of hope for her, but there is a light at the end of the tunnel. I will read more chapters to see where Ali goes. Thank you for the story
I liked the opening and the confessional aspect of the story. It sets it up very nicely. Both William and Alexandra initially don't seem to be ideal bedfellows, which gives the story an interesting dynamic, how will these two get what they want and need from each other? That William took a kind interest in Alexandra when she was at her least attractive I think is a prelude to his character's compassionate nature and the necessary building of trust. A good Chapter One!
English
Nice start
Not a sexy sensual story, but a moment of revelation for Ali. Not a lot of hope for her, but there is a light at the end of the tunnel. I will read more chapters to see where Ali goes. Thank you for the story
5 stars
Nice opening
I liked the opening and the confessional aspect of the story. It sets it up very nicely. Both William and Alexandra initially don't seem to be ideal bedfellows, which gives the story an interesting dynamic, how will these two get what they want and need from each other? That William took a kind interest in Alexandra when she was at her least attractive I think is a prelude to his character's compassionate nature and the necessary building of trust. A good Chapter One!
Sorry
Too blatantly derivative of SoG to read further.
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