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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone03/06/14

Seriously

this doe everything poetry shouldn't do, worst offense, you are told everything and it is pretty much a straight line from beginning to end. Compare to other I left a comment on, the asides? Not a straight line, which would be death in comedy, poetry is not that different.
No do you want the sing song here?
A mockery of the One adorned
With a crown of many thorns
Long ago this was forewarned

La, la,la off to hell, we go...
Didn't vote.

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by Magnetron03/06/14

Twelve

This is about 8 years old. It was intended to be cryptic. I would be surprised if anyone could peel this onion. An experiment in cleverness that obviously backfired. But, what the hell. Submitted just to see the reaction to it.

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