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by Cleardaynow03/06/14

Really fun

Subtle and clever thinking. Fun

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by Tristesse203/06/14

Brave New World?

Clever, the simplicity masks how well constructed this poem is. Some juicy alliteration and tasty line breaks. Recommended.

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