Matter of Taste

Fucked up author and story

Another god awful, unbelievable story. How about those guys gave both of them aids? Of course there are never any consequences in your stories. How about the husband gets up and goes to the hospital because no matter how much lube she used, his ass was torn so badly it required surgery. So the hospital people called the Police, they took swabs of his ass and pumped his stomach and took more samples. Then the women and the men went to jail for kidnapping, illegal restraint, assault, battery, rape and a number of other crimes. I'm sure one of the women turned States evidence in order to get a lighter sentence. So he divorced his crazy wife and kept all the assets as she spent a minimum of 12 years in jail. How's this pile of crap story working for you now Ed? I will give you credit for one thing. You have managed to piss off practically every single person that has had the misfortune to read any of your stories. I guess that's an achievement.

HE HAD THE RIGHT IDEA

just wont follow up with the divorce plan, TK U MLJ LV NV

Same Story Same Theme

Same 1 star. Your writing is actually not bad. Better than most. Too bad it's wasted.

See a therapist and spend some time jobhunting. Unemployment and depression are a dangerous combination and it beats dying in a pool of your own filth.

grossness

this is really sick gross writing my friend

Great

I actually enjoyed this. But my sexuality is kinda sick and twisted.

please shove a granade where the sun don't shine minus the pin and spoon

Ed you are one sick puppy. Please stop, and please don't reproduce. Stop.

I can't imagine anyone finding this author's stories erotic. I don't like trashing authors, so I won't do it to this author. All I will say is that of all the authors on this site, I find this author's stories the LEAST enjoyable.

She never had to worry about anything concerning him ever again.

Because he divorced her and took most of the assets. You see the stupid bitch made a video of her having him raped. Well he used that video at the divorce trial. He made out like a bandit and never spoke to her ever again. Why people think it's smart or clever to take pictures or make videos during the commission of a crime I'll never understand. Even in fiction it's just plain stupid. And that's what this story was - STUPID!

Fun story

Great short story. keep up the good work.

And to all other commenter´s that are sooo butthurt over this. Get out of this section.
Or are you lot too busy reading about women getting raped? Hypocrisy ftw.. idiots.

Ridiculous story

Why would a man stay with a woman that pays to have him raped? Why wouldn't he take the video and have her put in jail? Even for fiction, this makes no sense. No stars.

And he's divorcing the crazy bitch right?

Because there is no other possible ending. Of course there never is an ending to any of Edrider's stories are there?

Another Use For Dynamite!

Applied to Madge :

"There once was a girl named Alice,
who used a dynamite stick as a phallice
They found her vagina,
in South Carolina,
and bits of her tits in Dallas."

That author is a real brain sick idiot!!! MINUS 5*!!!

He is insane and needs help!!! That author has to be the biggest idiot on world!!!

Ha ha ha!! What a bunch of crap!!!

She cheated on him in his presence and he is forced to suck the sperm of her lover out of her arse?! You are only stupid when you think thats going to happen!!! Divorce and the law will be informed against the perpetrators!!

the law?

take in the woods butt rape her and kill her.....its the only solution awful story

Divorce the Bitch!

Then find and KILL all those involved with her plans, including her.