I feel I've read this story over and over again. Daughter just turned 18, Mom's away, Daddy lusts, daughter teases then allows him to fuck her. We needed more pages to this story. Good start but ended too soon.
She sad it: Your stories are no fun!
I told myself I wasn't going to read anymore of them because they suck, but I did hoping that you would find some writing skills.
Check out other writers such as _Lisa_ she is a great writer.
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I feel I've read this story over and over again. Daughter just turned 18, Mom's away, Daddy lusts, daughter teases then allows him to fuck her. We needed more pages to this story. Good start but ended too soon.
She said it
She sad it: Your stories are no fun!
I told myself I wasn't going to read anymore of them because they suck, but I did hoping that you would find some writing skills.
Check out other writers such as _Lisa_ she is a great writer.
TEASING...
and terriffic. Well written, captures one's imagination, and is lustful. Please continue. Thank you.
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