All Comments on 'Words She Whispers to Her Husband'

Your submission is too boring-perhaps one like a million others.

Terrible style. Stupid story. There is enough cuckerotica in LW's. Take this crap somewhere else. 1

This has to be the hottest story ever on LW. One line details one after the other so vivid and straight to the gut of the reader. Every married woman can identify with the wife here. (Wedding rings sparkling at the bar! Perfect!) Any real man can identify with the husband. Wife sharing, the most civilized and erotic thrill a husband and wife can ever hope for.

I like punctuation. And I'm not much for guys who enjoy being humiliated.

CRAP

CRAP AGAIN

STILL CRAP TO COME

ITS CRAP OH CRAP MY CRAP

AHHH; WAIT A SEC; AHH YES..

CRAP

CRAP AGAIN

OH CRAP

BTB BRIGADES

The black has spoken: this ain't poetry and this ain't no poet! Just 860 words of meaningless meaning. What more can I say!

An unusual style but I understand the idea. The 'willing cuckold' theme does not appeal to me but it is this author's story.

What does this little dicked loser and the slut have to live for?

He never claimed it was poetry. It's CORRECTLY placed in the hot wives category. SO if you guys don't like it. MOVE ON. WTF? I personally think it was awesome. If it's something you don't like DON'T READ IT.

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And Literotica actually passed this shit. This site is going to the dogs. Nothing but crap in loving wives anymore. 1*

all you big brave anony mousses, nooney mooses or whoever youse guys is, whyn't ya use yer names with all this criticism???

Your name really is wanolman just like mine is Tw0Cr0ws.

Really not much different from anonimity.

You bio doesn't say jack shit about you. Talk about being anonymous. So you got a fake name, big fucking deal. I got one too, it's called "anonymous" Got it fuckhead. Oh, by the way, this story sucked moose dick. 1* for polluting this category.

It's ok in terms of content, but I'll remember this one for the pacing. I kinda liked the one-line-at-a-time approach. Added something cool to this. Good job. 4*

and no remorse shown or known, TK U MLJ LV NV

"See you in Court". He filed for a divorce the next day. And then he went directly to the Doctor's to be checked for std's.

1 star

Stories whores tell, and the cucks who love them make a poor pair.

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