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The One with the Bad Ending

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/09/14

Well... That escalated quickly.

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by thebuffalo03/09/14

Damn. That was kinda/sorta ... different.

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Some people have a gift for story-telling.

And some people do not have the gift. You do not. With all your writing about "not killing the mood", you did a good job of killing it here.

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by Anonymous03/10/14

Really? That's it?
There is nothing sexy about this... AT ALL
Sorry, but I won't be looking for a story from you in the future.

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by Anonymous03/10/14

WTF????????

A joke. Right?

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by Anonymous03/10/14

Should this be in Fetish?

Because there is nothing remotely sexy in this story. Nothing. Zero. Zip. Zilch.

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