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Well... That escalated quickly.
Damn. That was kinda/sorta ... different.
Some people have a gift for story-telling.
And some people do not have the gift. You do not. With all your writing about "not killing the mood", you did a good job of killing it here.
Really? That's it?
There is nothing sexy about this... AT ALL
Sorry, but I won't be looking for a story from you in the future.
WTF????????
A joke. Right?
Should this be in Fetish?
Because there is nothing remotely sexy in this story. Nothing. Zero. Zip. Zilch.
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