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by Anonymous03/13/14

Better.

Make sure you stick with the editor. Chapter three saw you sliding back into your style from chapter one, while this chapter felt closer to the style from chapter two. I'd advise you to stick with this editor for the following chapters.

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by Joe830302/26/15

good

Not bad I would like to see what they are going to do next.

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