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Love it
It can happen like that. No preplans or anything, just spontaneous lust and daring to break the boundaries. This wonderful story squeezed it all into a beautiful happening. It doesn't matter why the husband and wife were so ready that particular night. They just were. And they enjoyed it to the fullest. This is a story of real people doing what comes naturally.
My 2 Cents
Happy Fucking birthday you loser wimp - life as you know it is over. Next time you wont be asked and you wont get to play
WoW
Someone kicked over some rocks today, look at all the little loser's running around.
And the population of LW drops another 10 points
Another cheating slut and a spineless husband. At least if you're going to write this idiocy, try and make it clever or entertaining. This was neither.
now if we could only get rid of your dumb fucking ass
dear annony, life would be good.
some birthday
you let yourself get cucked
your marriage is done
you heard it here first
ps: leave your balls at the door on you way out, because you don't deserve them
Let's Think About This
Your wife tells you the fuck she just got from a stranger was the best fuck she's ever had. Having thought this over, you then tell her this is the best present she has ever given you, My, my. Your future is indeed bleak..
1*
For writing this cuckie trash. That's what we need, another cuckie writer. Hasn't this category got enough of you fucks already?
A surprise
but not one I would want
Quick 'shared' story
Careless title, to begin with! Could have just as well (kinda) been Arbor Day the couple was celebrating ... 'wood' was involved! Nothing really depended on a 'birthday!'
The narrator (Hubby) TOLD 'We, the Readers' that Sweetie was flirting with The Bull but couldn't think of any flirty things she might have said (until she grabbed his package!) Too much narration. Easier to write, less interesting to be TOLD the fun stuff instead of HEARing it!
Sounds like the DP was vaginal instead of pussy & ass! But not really clear ... not that any distinction could really be discerned as long as the three fictional characters ended up happy! Fuck any reader interest! Hell, let's add the author, and make FOUR happy characters (one actual 'flesh & blood')
Not personally offended at reading a 'shared wife' story, but this one coulda been better done! Hell, it IS better than one I might submit ... but I wouldn't submit one this weakly done!
Wonderful story
Thank you very much for sharing your story. I love stories that involve both partners in a relationship who willingly decide to add a third (or more) to their lovemaking. Threesomes, especially MFM/MMF, do not have to be about humiliation.
Don't be bothered / worrued about anyone who reads a loving wife story and then complains that it is a cuckold story and/or your marriage is over. Every relationship (fictional or not) is different and unique to the persons involved.
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