"Pet Mommy": My Daughter Submits

Good story, BUTT...

If Anal Sex is painful, you're doing it wrong. The reason anal sex is painful is because the ass doesn't lube itself, and rectal tears are fucking dangerous. You can't have a character anally rape another character without lube and then have it start to feel good once they get used to it. It won't happen.

Michael could have been equally domineering and dominant if he had commanded his mother to prepare his sister-slut by rimming her and by squirting lube up her ass and coating his cock. All the while, Crystal could have been saying stuff like, "You can't be serious" and "I've never done DP!" And then she could have begged for it, showing she was ready.

At least Crystal prepared her mother for an anal pounding by stretching her ass out with a butt plug. But again, mentioning some sort of lube would have been cool.

Other than that, other than leaving folks with the impression that a fellow can just jam his cock up someone's ass and eventually they will like it (myth), this is a cool story. The way the tables turned was well played out, with Mom preparing the daughter and throwing her off balance by telling her she already had a master, but not revealing who. And then having Crystal filled with shame and doubt when Michael and Fredrick burst in on her incestuously pegging her mother. That was cool.

I hope Fredrick's mother turns the tables on him and dominates him! Fredrick is not very dominant at all. He's asking for help dominating his mother from his supposed sub?

I enjoyed the scene in the Adult Shop with daughter and mother. I had suggested a scene like that in an anonymous note. Maybe you took that suggestion or maybe you had planned that. Either way, that was cool. It showed the Daughter's strength and her joy in trying to humiliate her pet-mommy. I liked her collaring her mother, and I wish that would have been played up a bit more in the story, like Mom handing her leash to Michael to show who her True Owner and Master is.

I still think Freddy should have gotten pegged with a strap-on and/or fucked by Michael. He's submissive to everyone, and pretty much loves Michael, and would do anything to please him. Maybe that will happen in the story with Freddy's mother. Maybe his mother will demand that Freddy get fucked in the ass (with plenty of lube, of course).

I know, Gay-Male Sex is like the third rail of Literotica stories. Mom can suck the spunk out of her daughter's ass. Her daughter can fuck her with a strap-on. Mom can eat her pussy till she comes. But heaven forbid a guy kisses another guy or even jerks him off! Two men touching! That can't happen! Blah. I'm not particularly into gay-male sex. But I find the Taboo against it, especially in a category that is supposed to be about breaking taboos ironic and silly.

your stories

I have read a number of your works and find them truly exciting and quite pleasant. I hope you keep them coming.
This one I really enjoyed from chap 1 to 4.I hope you can keep pet mommy entertained with further exploits.

As good as the first three

I was curious how you were going to make this work and bravo you made it super hot

Once Again...

Slikstockinglover's delivered another very sesual, erotic, and kinky story. A bit on the bad side. But, isn't that what we love?

Wonderful

Great command... of everything!

Where's the story?

Question in title.

Incest is best

Your son/brother as Dom of mother &/or sister are your best stories and this one is one of your best. I cannot wait for your next chapter in the Pet Mommy series. Please don't take too long, but also please don't rush. I know that seems contradictory but that is how good this story was, it triggers one feeling of wanting the next chapter to read right now, while my mind knows you have a life outside of writing and that stories that are given enough time to be edited and thought out are some of the best. Just please don't make us wait too long.

Excellent

Yet another great read, well written and so exciting! Have to stop reading theses before work!

Hmm. getting Freddy's Mom in on this is going to be hot. You should make Crystal Freddy's girlfriends or something to that end.

Good Work SSL.

Sorry for the Confusion

Story showed up after previous post.

Still Intermittent at showing up...

I reported the problem this morning and tried again this afternoon from a different computer. First time the story did not show up, but a retry did display the story. Just retried again this evening from yet another computer, no story...

Freddy ruined it for me

Enjoyed the story, but I find incest stories often get ruined when you add the sons friend. Mommy is no longer only his, his sister was never just his. Freddy has no connection to incest, he doesn't belong in this realm, even adding his mother in is an entirely separate story to be told and stringing connections to eachother shows weak writing and poor focus on what's important. It also makes it seem you couldn't come up w/ more good content so you just went off into another tangent.The reader doesn't give a crap about Freddy unless they're of the viewpoint of the following...

- If they read as the mother/daughter and being shared w/ his friends can be seen as hot and slutty, but the mother shows barely any hesitation at doing so. She is okay w/ being w/ her son because she is his mother and gives her consent. Any mother would think of getting freddies mothers consent first and that would never happen.

- Or they read as the son or freddy and enjoy sharing their girls which is a rarity when considering the entire audience.

The son in this story is a teenager and having almost no jealousy or even taking some time to consider the consequences of sharing his girls shows extreme immaturity and makes the reader think the dude sees her more as a sex object than anything. I think you forgot that early on in the story you focus so much on the mother seeing her son as a reflection of her late husband. That's saying she sees him as a mature individual, but the story devolves into the opposite with no focus on him being mature or responsible. You seem to never notice you're writing about an immature boy who's mother is nothing but a sex slave to him. You kill the realm of her seeing him as a partner and someone she can love as a man, which is how the story starts at the beginning. By the end of this part the mother/daughter characters are nothing, but holes for the two male characters to use, and are removed from the realm of incest you started them in.

This is just my view, I'm sure some ppl will enjoy freddy and/or the direction you took, but not for me. Personally every scene w/ freddy was a total turnoff and made me want to skip over it. The beginning was very strong, but got lost very quickly. I may be too hard on you, but I find hearing what others think are weak points can make you a stronger writer.

- AnonDemon

Great Story

I loved the story, but i also felt Freddy should have not been included. I would have preferred Crystal to have submitted to the mom from the start. Overall I really enjoyed the story :)

good story

wouldve been better without freddy he ruined it for me but decent story keep writing

please continue

i want to see what happens with fredies mom

My New Favorite Sex Story

This is an incredible story. I absolutely loved it, the only thing I dislike was Frederick,and that's just because I'm not much of a sharing dom. Please make an epilogue for this. There was one thing I noticed during this story that I would like to address: You have Micheal and Frederick go in anal forcibly(without lube) several times, which is quite painful for the girls(which is only good if they had pain kinks). I would suggest in your future stories to remember that detail.

Loved the sharing of his sluts

Wow!! Excellent ending to a great story line.
Glad to see Michael making his Sister his slut also, and sharing her with his best friend.
I think you missed a sub-plot when Mommy Slut didn't come on her Daughter's licking and sucking. Mom had been banned from cumming until her Daughter was eating her pussy. Sorry, I'm the guy who does continuity checks of everything.

Thanks again for a great cock-hardening story to make us cum hard.

A little to Gay for me

You have good skills but this sharing family with a friend is just a little to much for me.I do like your other stories much better family is family very erotic fantasy some friend is just that a friend.

Un-Fucking...

...-believably HOT! As I said before in a comment in a previous part of this story, all that's missing is Michael's ass getting reamed and him sucking cock, plus his revelation of his love of wearing girl's panties and thigh highs...

Very fucking hot! Hope you do continue the series with Frederick's mom knuckling under.

amazing

This was a great story loved it..
Like the other comment would love
It to continue with the other mother and maybe
Introduce other family members.

more

More please

suggestions

Its your story and you proceed as you like but making Michael dress in panties will just reduce his Dom nature.And though you have opened many possibilities for future stories due to having federick involved in it,it would have been a far more better read if it was only in family.

The women nearly always submit to men. Casual sexism much?

Sexy, but I don't see why you had to make Crystal submit, I wanted the brother to submit to her too. I really don't see many multi-faceted, confident, dominant females portrayed as not just complete psychos on this site in any other section apart from Lesbian. I think literoticas got a bit of a gender problem it needs to adress, where are the dominant women making men fall in love people? I'm guessing you are a woman silkstockingslover, I understand your submissive desires, but it just seems worryingly like you and many other authors just think that any woman should always submit to men. I think this site needs more straight dommes.

holy!

too bad frederick is in there, otherwise it would be 6 stars

Pet Mommy-Daughter Submits

I have read all previous chapters before. I liked them more this time. This is the first time I read this chapter. It is the best.

So Many don't like the inclusion of Frederick, but the way the story started he belongs. I hope this isn't the last chapter. I can't wait to see Frederick's Mother dominated by Betty. I hope he has a sister for Betty to dominate and bring her into the fold. For those who want a Domme a brother could be included as a sub to all the women.

sub mommy

both the brother and sister should have been masters of there mommy....freddy should never have been in this story.

WELL DONE!

11:22pm .Treated myself to a bedtime story with this chapter. It was perfect in every sense. This has been more than just a story, certainly deserving of many awards. Maybe it is an award in itself to let you know that your writing did to me what you intended it to in every way. Certainly needing that explosive release at the climax of each chapter.

kudos once again to you and your team of writers who helped make this masterpiece.

Hugs
WoodSmithGuy :)

Freddy's Mom is another slave to Michael???

Will the next chapter be the submission of Freddy's Mom to both her son and to Michael?
How about having Mike's Mom seduce Freddy's Mom and have Michael then train, with Crystal's help, Freddy's slut mommy to be a slave to not only Freddy, but to Michael's whole family, MOM< CRYSTAL and of course MASTER MICHAEL!!!

Why share?

I read all 4 today, a very nice read. I do have a big problem though. Why in the hell did he share the wealth? This story would have been a five star, and favorited with out that, but... everything else was great off to read more of your work.

waiting for next story

When will you post next sequel?

what do you mean why did he share the wealth?

Two Young studs with big, hungry cocks? Especially adding the "geek" factor along with a very bitchy sister. All four chapters were great! Got me going. A friend introduced me to this site recently. Such lovely bedtime reads. ;-P

great

Don't you ever stop writing. I love your stories. You got a gift for writing.

Frederick wants his day

After reading these chapters ,you have to continue writing about Frederick's also..

Love your stories they are great.

Loved the build up.........

Good story !!!!!!!!! I don't care, I liked Freddie being included !!!!!!!!
After all, isn't that what a really good friend deserves ??????????

Truly fine

This is a truly fine series. I really liked the fact that the bitch sister ended up a sub to her dom geek brother.

Awesome stories

Love this story! Please keep writing more!

I'm ruined

I have read endlessly for years; thousands of books, novellas, short stories. Not all of them have been erotica but I'm no stranger to that realm. This is the hottest, sexiest series of adult writing I have ever come across and I mean that figuratively and literally. As of this comment, I am not sure I can read incest stories and erotica again. These four writings are the most complete, sexual submissions, that left me breathless. While incest is not something I want to achieve, it was in my masturbation fantasies when I was a teenager. I read them today because they add an element to the sexual fantasy that is exciting, dangerous, and alluring and I don't necessarily get that with mainstream porn. This series can't be topped in my opinion and I have a great challenge ahead to find something of equal or, impossibly, greater interest to fuel my erotic passions. I do plan to read a lot more of what Silk has written. Call me a true fan and thank you for your time and passion with which you write. I can only move forward hoping there are more stories starting with the seduction of Frederick's mom. These have opened my eyes to true, erotic writings and I am now encouraged, more than ever, to start submitting my own. Once again, I truly thank you for sharing your talents with us, the readers.

Keith
columbus4phun@yahoo.com

WTFF?

This is by far the weakest of the four stories and I am forced to down-vote for once.

What spoiled it was Crystal just up and saying in her head (obviously), "oh, ok, I'll just not be a fighter like I always am who can turn the tide on my brother and Domme him if I wanted too, and just go down on my knees and suck his cock and be a wimp... That sounds new, I'll give it a try!"

So the next chapter should then include aliens, bigfoot, and the ghost of dad, that would sound as believeable as Crystal's caving in as easy as she did. Perhaps you should have had some blackmail or such to make it more realistic? I don't know, you fucked this story up even though I voted 1-3 high...

Loved it!!!

I hope you continue with the story, I want to see how mommy slut seduces Frederic's mom, and maybe sisters, even though none were mentioned thus far.

Hot as Always SSL

Thank you for finishing your series, it really was one of my all time favorites here on Literotica : )

Amazing!!

Yes!! The bitch sister is put in her place as the lowest sub in the family :D Love how you've left it so you can come back at anytime and add more to the story Jasmine x

Wow

This story just keeps getting better and better. Hopefully it will continue on.

Can't get much hotter!

Very hot and well written. Love the idea of a brother fucking his sister as well as making her blow him and swallow his cum. Then have him fuck his mom and have his sister eat the cum out of her pussy and ass. That occurs at our house several times a week! Throw in fucking your dad and having him take us in any hole any time he wants is icing on the cake. Five stars, two thumbs up!

Great Story

I loved this story, You should try and keep it going, but sort of bringing out the daughter's dominate side, making the mommy her pet also.

so hot

I love the way u fuck ur mom every morning, Ix so hot Nd how u let ur sister know that girls can't do without cock

God!!

Disgusting!!

A true submissive has only ONE DOMINANT. Anything else is a joke of the lifestyle and is not true lifestyle. You can not serve more than one person down to your soul. This always causes problems and the relationship usually blows up. It's stories like this that make people thinking submitting to anyone and everyone and calling them all Master or Mistress is the lifestyle.. and it's not.
It's different if you want to remain an unowned sub.. but that's not what's going on here in the story.

good story

it's a good story but I feel including the friend was a mistake since he could always get a recording of michael fucking his mom and sister then use it to blackmail them into doing whatever he wants and the way he acts makes one feel he is the type who would do such