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Playtime Verses Worktime..and the winner was........
A nice story with a great twist in the middle. It was easy to see right away what was happening, but it was fun to watch the plot develop. Thank goodness the kids were gone for the night!
My only question:
Why are stories about an actual loving wife in categories other than Loving Wives??? I've only come across stories like this in that category a couple of times and, am very impressed that these stories are great example of what a loving wife should be; a married couple totally about each other. With just that little bit of adventure, not all that fetish BS that has made it's way into the LW category.
Otherwise, bravo on a great little story.
To answer 'My only question'
Thank you for reading the story and for your comment. I agree, there often seems to be doubt about where to put stories. The category descriptions are; Erotic couplings - ‘Wild one-on-one consensual sex’ and Loving Wives – ‘Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more’. This story is about a married couple having consensual sex not them having 'extra-marital fun', hence Erotic couplings. I am pleased you enjoyed it .
Mitch
Story was too obvious
You should learn to write better. I knew where you were going way too ealy in the story.
No surprise!!
Excuse me. Where's the story?
Far too little information to make this worthwhile.
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