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Carole's New Friends Ch. 01

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by Anonymous03/12/14

Great start!

Much enjoyed this well-written opening episode with a refreshing different style and look forward to more. No "five" yet, but if you keep up this standard I feel sure they will come!

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by maddict09/17/16

Hot

Not just rubbing on lotion, he was rubbing on her lotion that was hot and unexpectedly so. I think a few turns are in Caroles future.
In a couple of places I wasn't sure who was talking,
(No,' you replied, 'I should've been paying more attention. I'm the one who should be sorry.') Did I catch you here or am I reading it wrong, thats happened to me more than once, when the conversation goes back and forth at a quick pace. Jules said, Carole said, Bob said, can slow things down, enough of that thought sorry.
I will just have to read more of your stories and get to the bottom of it, like I hope Bob will

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