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Into the Unknowable Ch. 07

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by Anonymous03/13/14

Love this story ...

... but how can any spacecraft _orbit_ the Anomaly, this mass-less shadow of a thing ? _Cruise_ or _patrol_ the surroundings would seem more appropriate.

Or maybe, the monitoring spacecraft are loosely bound and _orbit_ around their common center of mass ?

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by Finchley03/13/14

Oops, missed the return

Only just spotted that this trilogy has returned. Just caught up on the seven chapters released so far. I love the story, as another commenter has pointed out there are holes in the physics, but I'm prepared to ignore them! Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for Paul, the most boring hero ever!

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