Loved all parts and ending. For all those who turn their noses up at stories in this hub that these are not loving wives, Fran is, because she stayed true to her man. True, she was tempted by an unknown power over her, but in the end, her faithfulness was rewarded. For her final slut "coming out" session, if I was the husband, I would instruct her to put on the sheer black blouse with no bra on and her lacy panties and that all, and let her stay like that with her friends in the bar. Again, 5 stars on all!
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Anonymous03/15/14
Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings.
As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected.
I found you whole story very exhilarating. I was wet the whole time which doesn't happen too often anymore. If you continue I hope you keep the idea of love for each other and commitment. I hate cheating and deception. What you wrote was fun and everyone won.
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Anonymous03/20/14
Great story
Any further adventure will make fascinating reading,
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Anonymous12/03/14
Bikers as marriage councilors and therapists, sure.
Some people just don't know good writing when they read it. Of course, they don't know bad writing either.
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Very good story from my point of view.
Fran got her excitement and found she liked to be a sub. Hubby was able to man up and provide that ownership she needed. No cheating.
Great story!
Loved all parts and ending. For all those who turn their noses up at stories in this hub that these are not loving wives, Fran is, because she stayed true to her man. True, she was tempted by an unknown power over her, but in the end, her faithfulness was rewarded. For her final slut "coming out" session, if I was the husband, I would instruct her to put on the sheer black blouse with no bra on and her lacy panties and that all, and let her stay like that with her friends in the bar. Again, 5 stars on all!
Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings.
As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected.
Once again bdsm is foisted as Loving Wives
Why is fetish posted in this category?
Please publish in the correct catagory
This one would be BDSM or Fetish. It will save you bitter comments and will giv this type of story it's best chance in the rAtings
Really good
I enjoyed reading this one. Please carry on writing.
Good start for what mite be major work.
Good read this one. Please carry on writing.
Great job!
It was creative and well written. Great job! Please keep writing.
Wild and crazy Loving Wives post...
Authors post, authors choice. My way of look'in at things. Thanks for sharing on Lit. jtcm, great story and writing.
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EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
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I found you whole story very exhilarating. I was wet the whole time which doesn't happen too often anymore. If you continue I hope you keep the idea of love for each other and commitment. I hate cheating and deception. What you wrote was fun and everyone won.
Great story
Any further adventure will make fascinating reading,
Bikers as marriage councilors and therapists, sure.
Some people just don't know good writing when they read it. Of course, they don't know bad writing either.
What Ever***
Thanks for the read.
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