i liked it. short, very nice written. i saw the situation you discribed in front of me. like i was there. So well done.
I really liked it. The details were just right, and the working of the minds of the two protagonists were truly nice.
Really liked the chemistry between the characters. Well written!
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it is a nice story.
i liked it. short, very nice written. i saw the situation you discribed in front of me. like i was there. So well done.
teh details were just right
I really liked it. The details were just right, and the working of the minds of the two protagonists were truly nice.
Hot!
Really liked the chemistry between the characters. Well written!
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