Not long enough or informative enough or clever enough to be bad. Just awful.
This really needs to be expanded upon. But it is off to a good start.
I'm curious to see where you're gong to take it.
That's a great start... The door has been left open for so much!
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Stupidity runs amok
Not long enough or informative enough or clever enough to be bad. Just awful.
good writing
This really needs to be expanded upon. But it is off to a good start.
Good start
I'm curious to see where you're gong to take it.
That's a great start... The door has been left open for so much!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Alone and Uninhibited Ch. 01 or
More submissions by TheNaughtyWife.