I havent read much of your work before SJP, but now I'm curious as to where this will go. You are a very analytical writer with good dialogue. I may have to stay tuned.
Susan, you have a surprise around every corner, I think it's a wonderful tale! :)
This chapter has me thinking our story's Susan may have actually run into the son she gave up for adoption and is now having second thoughts about her usual Saturday night seduction and my thoughts also say is this a 'police entrapment scene'-today's Steven is sure acting hinky and not like someone who wants sex, there is even the lack of any mention in this scenario. A very well thought out and written article that shows how educated and intelligent our beautiful author really is. Keep us in suspense and desiring more! I do like your style :):) Five stars with my Smiles! Jaybird :)
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better be more!!
I love it, what is next....and please keep it coming SJP!!
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I havent read much of your work before SJP, but now I'm curious as to where this will go. You are a very analytical writer with good dialogue. I may have to stay tuned.
Susan, you have a surprise around every corner, I think it's a wonderful tale! :)
This chapter has me thinking our story's Susan may have actually run into the son she gave up for adoption and is now having second thoughts about her usual Saturday night seduction and my thoughts also say is this a 'police entrapment scene'-today's Steven is sure acting hinky and not like someone who wants sex, there is even the lack of any mention in this scenario. A very well thought out and written article that shows how educated and intelligent our beautiful author really is. Keep us in suspense and desiring more! I do like your style :):) Five stars with my Smiles! Jaybird :)
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