Hope there a part two of this story
You have an excellent story and a clear opportunity for a great multi-part story! Thanks.
Very nice , especially enjoyed how the repair person was straight . a nice little twist . But what does Miss Fix it look like ? Nicely done
I just hope theirs a part -two soon : )
I hope you continue this adventure......
More than wanting a continuation, I'd like more of businesswoman's seductions!
That's what I am. You delivered an excellent story, with good craftsmanship and very interesting people. I would like to read its sequel.
A well-crafted and well-written story. Great job building up the characters and setting the scene - very believable. If you follow-up with a sequel, it would be interesting to have the business exec push her dominace further. Nice work.
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Very good
Hope there a part two of this story
Multi-part
You have an excellent story and a clear opportunity for a great multi-part story! Thanks.
very nice
Very nice , especially enjoyed how the repair person was straight . a nice little twist . But what does Miss Fix it look like ? Nicely done
Really good
I just hope theirs a part -two soon : )
hope
I hope you continue this adventure......
More of businesswoman
More than wanting a continuation, I'd like more of businesswoman's seductions!
Hot and Bothered
That's what I am. You delivered an excellent story, with good craftsmanship and very interesting people. I would like to read its sequel.
A well-crafted and well-written story. Great job building up the characters and setting the scene - very believable. If you follow-up with a sequel, it would be interesting to have the business exec push her dominace further. Nice work.
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