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Barb Becomes a Sex Toy Ch. 04

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by Anonymous03/15/14

grammar comment

Heres a constructive comment: There are two forms of this three letter word. Normally apostrophe s ('s)signifies a possessive. In the case of this word that is not so. Note the examples below.

its (no apostrophe) meaning, belongs to it. ,"I saw its collar."

it's (with apostrophe) meaning, it is," It's cold outside."

Also be careful to use the proper form of these words in context:
There - that place " The box is over there."
Their - belongs to them "That is their box."
They're - they are. "They're looking for the box."

Your; yours - belongs to you."This is your box." "This box is yours."
you're - you are. "You're looking for your box."

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by Anonymous05/15/14

Really like...

the fast pace. Descriptions are tops too. More please. And thanks!

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