next chapter asap
Loved the story. But did I miss something? At the end of part 1 she says to him to join her tomorrow night and to bring the camera. Jump to part 2. It ends with them getting ready for work. So did he go to her room the following morning? Or do they both work the night shift?
Yes, sorry, you're right. Just a continuity error, perhaps got too carried away with the plot. Thanks!
Really great . I hope you continue .
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great stuff
next chapter asap
Great story
Loved the story. But did I miss something? At the end of part 1 she says to him to join her tomorrow night and to bring the camera.
Jump to part 2. It ends with them getting ready for work. So did he go to her room the following morning? Or do they both work the night shift?
NudistBob
Yes, sorry, you're right. Just a continuity error, perhaps got too carried away with the plot. Thanks!
great
Really great . I hope you continue .
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