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Another above-average chapter.
When did the women find time to meet with the sexperts? Does this mean the attractiveness of the threesome is about to run its course? Many hetero males will be disappointed.
On the way down hill
You are on the road to ruining what has been a fun story up to now, finish now while you are ahead.It was their ideal world, Not someone elses
Not a fan of the direction this one is taking
I generally hate leaving any sort of negative feedback. These stories are essentially works of art, created and drawn from the imagination of the authors and posted - on a free site I might add - for our enjoyment.
That said, many readers come to...well, expect is not a fair word...hope, look forward to, a tale that holds their attention and is on some levels, believable...
I just think that the direction this is going, the author is starting to lose many of those traits that make a good tale.. I was fine with the intro of Sue to the mix, even though Mark seemed a bit in the dark as to how it all came about. The sex clinic thing is a bit off the wall, and it seems pretty clear the women have been discussing behind his back if they feel "involvement" with others wont be a problem.
But what really made me scratch my head was the suggestion of finding a fourth - another guy - to add to their group. I get it that this is in the group sex section, but that and Mark's reaction are a little too much.
Going to stick with it for another chapter or two...but not really feeling it
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