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by Anonymous03/15/14

Good, but...

Eh, I usually love monogamous romance stories, but this felt a little rushed. I mean by the second page, she was already ready to give up her anal cherry.

I would have loved to see the initial courtship and seduction played out a bit more. I mean the first date was 3 sentences long!

I rated this a 4.25, and since Literotica does not allow half point ratings, AND, since I always feel guilty about shortchanging people who take the time and effort to publish a story, I rated it a 5.

Anyway, hoping to read more of your works.

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