very well put into the words the feeling of chasing and having the forbidden fruit. the fruit is well worth if you don't disturb the marriage. if not your real experience, then i hope you have one soon!...."Good natured discussion had turned to joking, the joking to teasing, and that teasing had evolved into a yearning that could only be satisfied one way."
I am Jen (married mother of one and accountant by profession). I could totally relate to your story or should I say it projects how my future will unfold. I have recently started flirting with a dentist and oh my....it is thrilling and I love the feeling of being wanted and being alive. We haven't "done" it but as your protagonist stated "She could always reason her way into doing something that she wanted to do." Enjoy!
- Jen, TX
Well written. You conveyed the sentiment of pent up desire very well. Something that many here could relate to... :-) I look forward to your next chapter
Good little piece. You must have experience in this area.
I did not look at your profile to know your gender but the woman seems pretty close to spot on accurate. As a guy that is the male perspective of course. Married women I've been enjoying prefer the long build up of chatting to any quick sexual contact.
English
great first story
very well put into the words the feeling of chasing and having the forbidden fruit. the fruit is well worth if you don't disturb the marriage. if not your real experience, then i hope you have one soon!...."Good natured discussion had turned to joking, the joking to teasing, and that teasing had evolved into a yearning that could only be satisfied one way."
HOT
Great story. Hope to see more soon.
close to heart...
I am Jen (married mother of one and accountant by profession). I could totally relate to your story or should I say it projects how my future will unfold. I have recently started flirting with a dentist and oh my....it is thrilling and I love the feeling of being wanted and being alive. We haven't "done" it but as your protagonist stated "She could always reason her way into doing something that she wanted to do." Enjoy!
- Jen, TX
Congratulations on your first submission!
Well written. You conveyed the sentiment of pent up desire very well. Something that many here could relate to... :-) I look forward to your next chapter
Great
An excellent story. I do hope you will keep writing.
Wonderfully constructed
Well written, builds to a wonderful ending. Good development of the characters and their situation. Hope you'll write more.
I ENJOYED YOUR USE OF TREPIDATION
Good little piece. You must have experience in this area.
I did not look at your profile to know your gender but the woman seems pretty close to spot on accurate. As a guy that is the male perspective of course. Married women I've been enjoying prefer the long build up of chatting to any quick sexual contact.
I get the feeling...
that this story has some truth to it...
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