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by Anonymous

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by todski2803/20/14

you manage to capture the humanity and the sexuality in this piece, nicely constructed as all of yours are,

you out line the memory and tie it together well with the present and reality.

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by Maria239403/20/14

I second

the comment of the previous commenter;) I especially liked the "locked and loaded" phrase. Comparing her to a shotgun ready to burst forth is really good writing! I always enjoy your poetry as it gets better with each posting! I am glad I stopped in today.

~ maria

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