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Loved this chapter!!! Fabulous story.
Starting to not like Paddy. He wants to help her change yet keeps bringing up her past and rubbing it in her face.
Wish Paddy had let the past go
Having the playroom what it is now is going to bring up bad memories for her. I wish he would let her get over her past. Every time she goes in there he rubs her face in that. I hope they have a conversation about how she felt. I know that he's trying to help her create good memories about it, but in this case, how is Paddy any different than her mom's old boyfriend who pimped her out? I know that Paddy is different, but he needs to find a way to let her know it. Maybe Callie needs to cry in her room when she thinks back or something. Great story, Ellie, but now we have a problem that needs to be resolved.
im a fan of yours Xellie but i didn't like this chapter
felt forced and an add on
Welcome back Ellie
I don't know that it felt forced....but this was a bit different. I'm not sure where Paddy and Calliope are going after this chapter but I really enjoyed reading your work again. Thanks!
Not so sure...
I love you xelliebabex, and I have really loved this story, but I struggled with this chapter. I really don't like the way Paddy is focused on her past and uses it as a way to humiliate her. It seems at odds with the loving person he is at other times and made me uncomfortable. Also not sure that I liked him sharing her like this. It did feel like he was pimping her out, and I also didn't like that it wasn't something they had discussed. We know Paddy has issues with sharing, that he is trying to work out here, but whose needs is he serving? Is this something she wants? Or would they both be happier keeping the relationship between the two of them?
Please Make Another Chapter🙏
I loved it I feel like Paddy shouldn't share Callie anymore but it was amazing please make more chapters I have read them all multiple times.
love it!!
Please write more when u have time! I am desperate for you to finish this story as well as Bella. Love you as an author! Favorite, hands down.
GREAT STORY BUT...
While I was completely riveted and aroused by every chapter... this entire series involving Baby Callie & Daddy Paddy belongs in the Non-Con category and not to be confused as anything else but fictional fantasy. Otherwise it would be abuse pure and simple. Any Dom/Sub relationship recognized by the BDSM community is a 100% consensual one. Especially in a Daddy/Baby role-play where power distribution is so one sided and even Dom/Slave relationships usually are constructed with negotiated limit levels and safe words. Again I absolutely loved the story and think the writing some of the best here on this site I would just feel alot more comfortable with it being more accurately categorized. I would hate for anyone to truly take this as their intro to the real BDSM community. Paddy's actions are not only unethical everywhere but illegal in most developed countries.
more, more!
Would love to know what happens next
I absolutely loved this story from the beginning until now. You have an amazing imagination and attention to detail. Can't wait for more if there is more to this story.
More!
Really want to see more hope you upload a new chapter soon!
more...
Plz finish this story next it needs resolution. This was the story that made me fall in love with your beautiful writing! Thanks for your consideration.
Settling in.
So Daddy turned the playroom into her old club. Will he whore her out to the Doms in the family and humiliate her by putting her back into that Scene? Will she begin to question his love for her if he demeans her too much? He seems to enjoy her humiliation to the point of completely destroying her self-esteem. Is that what he wants? I worry what it will do to their relationship.
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