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Well written but just too depressing for my tastes.
Good
Always love a good succubus story! :)
Wonderful!
I loved it! Keep doing what you're doing!
More chapters!
Excellent story!
I loved how predatory Eseltra felt as she had her way with Martin. Lamb indeed.
I also liked how it felt as if he was genuinely overwhelmed by her aggressiveness. It wasn't that he stopped being terrified, Eseltra just made Martin her bitch.
Nice work, keep it up!
Best first work ive ever read
The plot is amazing and its beutifully written. But the start of the sex seemed to begin to quickly, a little more foreplay would of been nice. But all in all a great story.
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