Motes

I enjoy erotic poems that are subtle as this one is. Nicely done.

"bright as a bush full of raindrops" is really imaginative.

Saw your comment.....

....on gm's comment and came to look. He's right, this is well done, subtle and understated and you're right - more people should be reading and commenting. I'm sorry I missed this 1st time around.

Excellent

Sweet, subtle romantic erotica. "...her skin, some mine"

ohhhh!

This is so beautiful, tender and romantic. I can't say enough about this one. Really well done, probably deserves an E. Thank you for this piece of longing, appreciation and love. You are good!

~ maria