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Innocent Text Messages Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/26/14

"infidelity"

As I understand it, the word means going behind someone's back. Being dishonest with the person.

It doesn't in itself mean extra-anything sex.

Duh

(It means betrayal, being untrue to the person, and what those terms mean are between "partners." And a lotta prunes don't need to weigh in on what's not their business.)

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by Anonymous05/30/14

Fortunate

You, sir, are indeed very fortunate to have such a lovely wife with such a powerful libido!
That she is now seeking elsewhere tells you a lot about you. You are unwilling and incapable of fucking your own wife.
Your lovely wife seeks thrills and joys - yeah, even by "just flirting".
You too should now regain control of her sensuality. Hot and wet when she gets home from text flirting? Why man, you need not waste precious time with irrelevant foreplay.
Great story: keep telling us more, much more about Selene!
Mary Ellen
PS. Happened to me, too... that's why I know so much about you already.

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by Anonymous06/02/14

Fortunate, indeed!

Your reader Mary Ellen is correct. let the other bloke do all the work, getting your wife hot and ready and wet for you.
She comes in the door, fuck her hard.
Then sit back, have a beer, let her cook dinner for you. Fuck her again later if you want.
Let the other guy do the work and then jerk off all alone by himself.
FIVE STARS FOR YOUR STORIES

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by tazz31707/17/14

ONE OF THOSE TWO

had better shit and get off the pot, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by ohyessssss09/10/14

a man who cares

I won't give those 3 steps to the door. Any man who feels he has the right to come on to my wife is going to feel pain. I promise. In this instance, so does the wife.

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by Anonymous09/27/14

I like your writing.

I'm not an English major so I can't explain why, but your writing is so easy to read, and the characters seem so real that they come alive. I would rank you amongst the best with HDK. Keep writing please, and thank you for the stories.

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by Tavadelphin10/28/14

Good start

Wonder about the ending

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by aptonthe50303/16/15

Very Good

First chapter!
Believable characters in a very realistic situation.
Thanks and please keep writing!

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by sbrooks10310/03/15

Texts

The sheer NUMBER of texts is troubling.

He HAS to insist that she find another way to "get through the night!" If it is possible for her to transfer away from Brian he should insist on that also.

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by laptopwriter10/03/15

Okay...first story?

I'm very impressed. I see you haven't written anything in awhile but I will look for anything new and I will have to read you other work. Can't wait to read the next two chapters and see what happens. This chapter gets a big 5 from me.

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by Tootight102/16/16

good story

My immediate thought was that his niece left her phone, and he had the wrong one.

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by javmor7902/16/16

@Tootight

I like your imagination. I wish I thought of that when I was writing this story. I may try to use a twist like that in the future.

This is why authors enjoy comments. Thanks for that.

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by Anonymous04/25/16

Damn you're good.....

A little bit long winded I thought but shit........I feel like I'm in the frigin room with your characters.....I found another great author on this site, lol..... Don't let your head get too big because I hope you are not 79, I want to read your stories till I'm 79.......bill

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by Drbeamer333308/15/16

Second time through...

Still love it. Still five. Still a favorite. Very well developed. Love the buildup.

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